英语命题作文：父亲节就要到了，请写一篇以“我的父亲”为题的英语作文。

MyFather

Thereisalwaysabrilliantimagelivinginmyheart.Thatismydearfather.Seenthroughtheeyesofmanyotherpeople,fatherseemstobeaveryordinaryperson.Butheisquiteextraordinaryinmyeyes,Ihaveneverlostmywonderathisgood-personalitiessuchasdiligence,devotion,care,optimismeversincemychildhood.

Beingafarmer,fatherworksveryhardinthefieldsalltheyearround.Heworksfromdawntillduskeverydayandeventillmidnightwhenitistheharvestseason.Heseldomenjoysleisurewithotherfarmersevenifthefarmworkisnotmuch.Hechoosestoliveabusylifewithreluctancetostopforawhile.

Fatherdevotesallhimselftoourfamily.Aswearepoor,healwaystrieshisbesttosupportourfamilyandaffordthetuitionsformybrotherandme.Forthewholefamily,forbrotherandme,heneverstopsworkinglaboriouslyinthefieldsthroughouttheyear.Nowhehasgotawrinkledfaceandwhitehairbecauseofexcessivehardwork,lookingmucholderandweakerthananyotherpersonofhisage.Inspiteofallthis,fathernevercomplainstous.Itishisfulldevotionthatwerelivingabetterlifenow.ItishisfulldevotionthatbothmybrotherandIareabletostudyatcollege.

Fathershowsmuchcaretouschildrenandmymotheraswell.Wheneverthereisanydeliciousfoodonthetable,hejustleavesittouswhilehetakesthesimpleonehimself.IfmybrotherandIfallill,hewillnothesitateamomenttogetsomemedicineforusortakeustoseethedoctor.Mymothersuffersabaddisease.Fatherlooksafterherverycarefully.Heneverletsmotherdoanyheavyworkbothathomeandinthefield.Motherappreciateshimmmuchthatsheoftenpraiseshimasamodelhusbandbeforeothers.

Fatherisapersonfullofoptimism.Henevercomplainsaboutourpoorlife.Heisneverfrustratedbytrouble.Heoftentellsusthateverythingwillbeallrightifwehaveenoughconfidenceinlife.Duetohisoptimism,weareallconfidenttofaceourlifeandwork.

Weallthinkthatfatherisnotintheleastanordinaryman.Heplaysanextraordinaryroleinmyfamily.Wecanthaveanythingwithouthim.NowImpursuingfurtherstudiesatcollegefarawayfromfather.Imisshimverymuch.AndIoftenseehiminmydreams.Hisgreatimageisdeeplycarvedinmymind.

评语：

本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。

作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。