假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。

注意：1．词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：牛津——Oxford费用——fee

DearSir/Madame,

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Yours,

LiHua

范文

1

MynameisLiHua.I’mhavingalanguagetrainingatOxfordUniversity.IplantohaveatriparoundLondononSunday.luckily,InoticedthatthereisanadvertisementonatouraroundLondononthenet.However,Istillhavesomequestions.

First,I’dliketoknowwhat’sthepriceforstudents.Anddoesitincludetheentrancefeeandthelunch?IfwevisittheBuckingham,canwehaveshoppingtime?What’smore,willyoupleasetellmethetimetoreturnbecauseIhavesomeotherthingstodealwithlater.I’llbeverythankfulforyouranswer.

2

Iamattendingashort-termlanguagetrainingprogramrightnowinOxford,planningforavisittoLondononSunday.WhenIwassurfingtheinternetandhappenedtoseeyouradvertisement,itcaughtmynoticeatonce.Butthere’resomedetailsnotclearlyshowedintheadthatIwanttomakesure.

Isthepricechargedintheadthesameforstudents?Doesitincludethecostforlunch,andisthereanyextraentrancefeesneeded?Duringthewholetrip,willtherebeanytimeleftforshopping?Andwhencanweactuallygetback?

Ineedalltheaboveinformationtodecidewhethertojoinyourtour.Pleasesendbackyourreply.

Thanksalot.

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I’mastudentandI’mreceivingEnglish-traininginOxfordUniversity.I’veplannedtomakeatriptoLondononSunday.Severaldaysago,IhappenedtofindanadvertisementforatrulyexcitingdaytourontheInternet.However,therearestillsomeinformationunclear.SoI’mwritingtoyoutomakethemclear.

First,Idon’tknowwhethershoppingtimeduringthetourisarranged.Asyouknow,I’dliketodosomeshoppinginLondon.Secondly,itisabouttheprice.Iwonderwhetherthepriceprovidedincludestheentrancefeesandtheexpenseforlunch.What’smore,whataboutthepriceforstudents?Lastly,Iwanttoknowthetimetoreturnbesidesthestart-time.

That’sall,.Yourearlyreplywillbeappreciated.

4

IhavejustlearntabouttheexcitingtouraroundLondonadvertisedontheInternet.ButIhavesomequestionsaboutthetrip.Aboveall,Iameagertoknowwhethershoppingtimeisincludedinthetour,forIhaveplannedtobuysomepresentsforfriends.What’smore,I’mwonderingwhetherthepriceyouprovideincludesentrancefeesandthelunchfeeandwhetherIcanpaylessmoneywithastudentcard.Stillmore,pleasetellmewhenitisthatwewillreturn,forIhavetomakesomepreparationsfortheMonday’sLanguageclasses,inOxford.

Thankyouverymuchansweringallmyquestions.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreplyandhopingtoenjoyanexcellenttouronSunday.

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I‘amattendingashorttrainingoflanguagenowinOxford.IwanttopayavisittoLondonthisSunday,soI’mveryinterestedintheadvertisement“ATrulyExcitingDayTour”whichyouadvertisedontheInternet.ButIhavesomequestions.Iknowwe’lltravelBigBen.LondonEyeandBuckinghamPalace,butIdon’tknowanythingaboutourshoppingtime.Thereisonlya“￡45”abouttheprice.However,Iwanttoknowwhetheritincludestheentrancefeesandthelunchfee.Ialsodon’tknowifitisapriceforstudentsoradults.Besides,Iwanttoknowwhat’sthetimetoreturn.Thankyou.

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IhavereadyouradvertisementandI’mveryinterestedinyourADayTour.SoIwanttoknowmoreabouttheexactdetails.

Theadvertisementshowstheplacestovisitwhileithasn’ttolduswhattheshoppingtimeis.Also,thepriceisnotveryclear.Couldyoupleasetellmewhatthepriceforstudentsisandiftheentrancefeesandthelunchfeesareincluded?What’smore,Ican’tgetthecleartimetoreturnfromtheadvertisement.

Ihopethatyoucangivemeareplyformoredetailedinformation.

Thanyouverymuch

7

I’mveryinterestinginyouradvertisementwhichcaughtmyeyeswhenIwassurfingthenet.NowI’mwritingtoaskaboutsomedetailsaboutit.

Placestovisitsoundattractive,butI’dliketoknowifwehaveshoppingtimeandwhenitis.SinceIamnotastudentofOxfordbutattendingashortlanguagetraininghere,Ineedtoknowwhether45poundsisthepriceforstudents.Istillwantbothincluded.6:30inthemorningisagoodtimeforstartingthetour,butwhenwillwereturn?

IreallywanttotakeyourDayTourServiceonSunday,soIlookforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Bestwishes.

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mynameisLiHua,andIamtakingpartinalanguagetraininginOxford.IhaveplannedtotravelinLondononSundayandIhavefoundanadvertisementformytraveling,buttherearesomeproblemswhichImustaskyouforaclearexplaination.

ThisadvertisementsaysthatIcantravelinaplacecalledBigBen,LondonEye,BuckinghamPalacebybuswhenistheshoppingtime?ItsaysthatIneedtospend$45.isitthecompleteprice,containingentrancefees,lunch?Andisthisthepriceforstudents?Whenisthetimeforshopping?ItsaysIcanstartat6:30am.ButwhenIcanreturn.

I’mlookingforwardtoyoureply.Thankyou.

(注，本卷原来打了16分。后改为20分)

9（24分）

Iamastudenttakingashort-term(course)oflanguageinOxfordnow.IamplanningtopayavisittoLondononSunday.Ihavereadyourad.ontheinternetandIaminterestedinit.ButI’vegottofindoutsomemoredetailaboutthetrip.

Iwonderifthereisanyshoppingtimearrangedduringthevisitandhowlongifany.AndIwanttoknowweathertheprice(45$)includestheentrancefeesandlunchfees.Ifnot,isthereacutforstudent?Besides,Ihavenoideaabouttheexacttimetoreturn.Iwanttofinditout.

Sorrytotroubleyou.ButI’mlookingforwardtoyourreplytomyquestionssincerely.

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