这篇作文条理清晰，语言流利，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。

TheTibetanMinority

Asitisknowntousall,thereare55minoritygroupsinChina,eachwithitstraditionalcustoms,costumesandculture.Nowlet’stakealookattheTibetanMinority.

TheTibetanMinoritygroupliveinQinghai,Gansu,SichuanandYunnanProvince.Andthehighestridgeintheworld─beautifulandmysteriousTibetistheirmajorhabitat.Asthefertilizedprairiestretchesaroundthehabitantsasfarastheeyescansee,mostpeopleliveonanimalhusbandry,raisingsheep,goats,cattleandgrowingaspecialkindofplantcalledQingke.Onaccountoftheuniqueclimate,peopleoftenwearwarmandcomfortablebootsinwinter,andtheyarealwaysdressedindelicaterobeswhicharemadeofthefurofsheep.Oftentheytakeoffonesleeveoftheclothesandtieitaroundtheirwaistsinordertoworkeasilyanduseitaswarmquiltsatnight.

Bothmenandwomentherelikewearingsilverornaments,whichlookverymysteriousandfullofmagicalpower.Andtheyaregoodatsinginganddancing,andthementherecanhavebraidstoo.Whentheymeetanimportantguest,theywillpresenthimorheraHada,apieceoflongwhitesilkclothtoshowtheirrespect.AndtheywillalsotreattheguesttoaspecialkindofdrinkcalledSuyouTea,whichsomepeoplefindhardtoenjoy.Besides,thehabitantshavedevelopedboththeirownwrittenandspokenlanguages,andthelongpoemstheywroteplayanimportantroleinChineseliterature.Andtherearemanywell-protectedculturerelicsaswell,takingthegrandBudalaPalaceasanexample.Itisahistoricalmuseumaswellasanarttreasury,wherepeoplecansharetheirspiritbeliefinBuddhismandgetartisticentertainmentofthecarvedpaintingsandthebeautifully-writtenchirographies.字串2

TheTibetanethnicgroupisalsofamousforitsstrangecustominfuneral.Thinkingthatthesoulbelongstotheskyafterapersondies,theyusuallyputthebodyonaplatformoutdoors,sprayonitandwaitthecondorstocometoeatthebody.Inthisway,theybelievethesoulgoesuptothesky.

TheTibetanMinorityisbrimmingoverwithdeepemotions.Thepeoplethereareveryzealousandhospitableandtheylivefreelyandhappilyonthespaciousgrassland.TheirhistoryandculturecontributetothediversityofChina,sowecertainlyshouldprotectthemandgetthempopularizedandletthemreceivegreatrespecttheydeserve.