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TheDisabledShouldHaveEqualRights

Peoplewholivewithdisabilitiesarealwaysconsideredshameful,foritwasdifficultforthemtomanagetodothedailyaffairsthatwetakeforgranted.Infact,theyhavenodifferencesfromusexpecttheirdisabilitieswhichareformedbecauseofinborndeficiencyorunfortunateaccidents.Luckily,nowwefindthatthereismuchwecandotohelpthem,suchasimprovingthelivingconditionsofthem.

ButonedaywhenIgottoahigh-gradehotel,Irealizedthattherewasstillmuchleftforustodotoprovidetheequalaccesstothedisabled.AssoonasIgotthroughthedoorofthehotel,Ifounditalmostimpossibleforthelameortheblindtoenter.Theglassdoorwouldkeeprevolvingunlesssomeonestoppedit.Peopleinwheelchairswerehardlyabletostopthedooranditseemedthatthewidthofthedoorwasnotaswideasthatofthewheelchair.Ontheotherhand,therevolvingdoorwaslikelytohitthearmsorheadsoftheblindwhentheytriedtogetthrough.Theservicecounterwastoohighforthepeopleinwheelchairstoreach.Iftheywantedtoseekcounselofcheckinginorgetpublicitymaterials,theycouldhardlybeservedasnormalpeople.

Thecounteraswellasthephoneswasinsohighapositionthatitcouldn’tbereachedbypeopleinwheelchairs.Exceptthese,thestairswereoneoftheinconvenientfacilitiesforthedisabled.Therewerenoelevatorsorevenplainpassagesforthelame,sothattheywereunabletogettoanotherfloorunlessothersofferedhelp.

Everymemberofsocietyhastherighttoareasonablequalityoflife,includingthedisabled.Associetydevelops,wehavetheresponsibilitytoofferequalaccess.Onlyinthiswayarethedisabledabletoliveproductiveandmeaningfullivesaswedo.