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Whatisbeautyinyourmind?

Everyoneadmiresbeauty.Everyonehashisownstandardaboutbeauty.

Nowadayssomepeopletendtothinkthattheyownbeautyiftheyhaveagoodlooking.Theyarenotsatisfiedwiththeirappearance.Theyspendmuchmoneytakingakindofoperation.Canbeautyreallybeman-made?Ifso,everybodycangetbeauty.Asaresult,thereisnobeautyatall.Theappearanceisgivenbyourparentsandisuniqueintheworld.Everyoneshouldvalueit.Iwouldrathernatureasthestandardofbeauty.Justacceptyourself,accepteverythingthegodgivestoyou,andcreatethebeautifullifebelongingtoyou.

Manyheroesdonthavebeautifulsurface.However,theirbeautifulimagesoftencometoourminds.Theirbeautycomesfromtheircontributionstothesociety.Dontbeeagertojudgewhetherapersonisbeautifulornotwithoutathoroughunderstandingofhim.Abeautifulpersonisnottheonewithagoodlooking,butwithabroadandkindheart.

Goodlookingispleasantwhilespiritualbeautyismoreimportant.Asanoldsayinggoes,"Virtueisfairerthanbeauty."Ifyouhaveakindheart,youownrealbeauty.