这篇作文条理清晰，语言流畅，很值得借鉴，尤其是定语从句的运用。

OlympicGamesinBeijing

WhataGreatOlympicGames!

The29thOlympicGameshasbeenoverinBeijing，ChinaonAugust24，2008，whichhasleftagreatimpressiononthewholeworld.About204countriesandregionsattendedtheOlympicGames.IntheGames，ourChineseathleteshavewon51goldmedals，whileAmerica，36;Russia，23.Thisisthefirsttimethatwe，ChineseathleteshavewonsomanygoldmedalsinoneOlympicGames，whichmeansoursportsgamesbelongtothefirstclassintheworld!

ItisourathletesintelligenceandotherqualitiesthathavewonthegreathonorforusChineseall!Dayswhenwewerelookeddownuponhavegoneforever!FromtheveryGames，wehaveprovedthatourgovernmenthastheabilitytoholdtheOlympicGamessuccessfully!NotonlycanweholdtheOlympicGameswell，butalsowecanperformwell.Thefacthasshowedeverythingtotheworld!Itisthesuccessful29thOlympicGamesthatdestroysthesayingofthosewhodoubtedaboutitdaysago!Whatagreat，successfulandimpressiveOlympicGames!