假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).

I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.
Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!
Allthebest!
Yours,
LiHua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

DearBob,
WelcometoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.
IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.
Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

DearBob,
Howareyouthesedays?
I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.
Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.
Yours,
LiHua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

作文：
DearBob,
I’mgladtohearfromyou.
Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.
ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.
Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.
Willyoubesatisfiedwiththisflat,oryouwantanotherone?Justletmeknow.I’lltrymybesttohelpyou.
Yours,
LiHua

满分理由
本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitablehouse”、“notfarfrom’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。