下面是LiHua给ZhangHong的信,请你以ZhangHong的口气按提示写一封词左右的回信.
September16
DearZhangHong,
HowiseverythingwithyouIhopethingsaregoingwell.
Thereisnotmuchnewshere.Ijustgotoworkeverymorningandcomebacktomyapartmenteverynight.Shanghaiiscrowdedwithpeople,butIdontreallyknowanyofthem.Idontlikethecity,butmyjobisquiteinteresting,andthepayisquitegood.
WhatareyourplansforNationalDayIfyoudonthaveanythingspecial,IhopeyoucanvisitShanghai.Comeandsharemyapartment.Itisquitelargeanditisnearthetheatres,museumsandstores.
Writesoon,andsayyoucanspendtheholidayhere.
Sincerelyyours
LiHua
回信提示:回信应包括以下内容:
⑴因故信至昨天才收到;
⑵LiHua喜欢他的工作,但不喜欢上海,ZhangHong谈自己的看法;
⑶谢绝LiHua的邀请,并说明原因;
⑷也向LiHua发出来杭州度假的邀请.
【参考答案】
September25
DearLiHua,
ThankyouforyourletterdatedSeptember16.ItwasntuntilyesterdaythatIgotit,asIhadbeenoutonbusinessforaweek.
Inyourletter,youtoldmethatyoupreferredyourjobtothecityofShanghai.Inmyopinion,Shanghaiisanexcitingandabeautifulplace.Trytoenjoyyourselfinyoursparetimebesidesyourdevotiontowork.
ImsorrytosaythatIwontgotoShanghaibecauseourschoolwillholdanopen-airparty.Ihavetostayfortheperformancesontheholiday.Bytheway,wouldyoupleasecomeandjoinusinthepartyHangzhouissobeautifulinautumnthatImsureyouwilllikeit.
Yours
ZhangHong(127)
【解题导引】写回信与首次给人写信不同,它必须以别人给你的来信为基础,展开你的写作思路,决不能置他人的来信于不顾.因此,第一步首先要细读来信并读懂信的内容,包括一些细节及信的言外之意.其次要对来信所提出的问题作出相应的反应,表明自己的态度和看法,并解释其原因.最后,写回信者也可以介绍自己方面的新闻或向来信人提出建议或要求等,这样"一来一往"则发挥了书信的功能,达到了相互交流之目的.
另外,在写信中,务必注意书信的格式.由于近几年高考所要求写信的题目均已给出了相应的头,尾,弱化了学生在书信这一书面表达能力的培养.故广大师生有必要加强书信中的日期,称呼,结束语,签名等方面的训练,同时还要特别注意正文部分的头尾常用客套话的运用.