将下列对话以第三人称改写成一篇110左右单词的短文.

Dialogue

Theyearis1963intheUSA.Twomenaretalkinginprison.

A:Whyareyouinhere

B:Iwasonthemarch.

A:Whatmarch

B:HaventyouheardTherewasabigcivilrightsmarchthroughthecenterofBirminghamyesterday.

A:Whywasthat

B:Iimagineyourenotveryinterestedinpolitics.

A:Imastrangerhere.Imfromthewestcoast.Tellmemore.

B:Itslikethis.WeblackpeopleofBirminghamwantequalrights.Wewantthesamerightsasthewhitepeopleinthecity.Foryearswevebeendemandingbetterhousingandjobs.

A:Soyouretellingmethatthesituationhereisbadforblackpeople.

B:Thatsright.Werenottreatedasequalcitizens.Wecantgotothepublicparksorswimmingpools.Itsforbidden.

A:Whathappenedonthemarchthen

B:Ijoinedinthemarchandweweremarchingpeacefullyalongandthenthepolicecameup.

Theytoldustogohomebutwewenton.Theysaidthatthemarchhadbeenforbidden,butthatwasnttrue.Theyhituswiththeirsticksoverandoveragainandputsomeofusinprison.

A:Iimaginethathurtalot.

B:Yes,mywholebodyhurts.

【参考答案】Thestorytookplacein1963,whentheblackpeoplewerenottreatedasequallyasthewhitepeopleintheUSA.Theywerenotpermittedtogotothepublicparksorswimmingpools.Besides,theirhousingwasinpoorconditionsandtheydidveryheavywork.Todemandthesamerightsasthewhites,blackpeopleofBirminghammarchedalongthestreetpeacefully.Butthepolicewantedtostopthembyhittingthemwiththeirsticksoverandoveragain.Theblackpeopledidnotgiveupeventhoughsomeofthemwereputintoprison.Theydecidedtogoonstrikeuntiltheywonthefightagainstracialdiscrimination.(112)

【解题导引】本对话反映了20世纪50年代后期到60年代美国黑人为争取和维护平等的公民权而举行大规模民权示威游行,兴起了少数民族争取民主权利的群众运动以及遭到美国当局镇压的情况,揭示了美国种族隔离,种族歧视的黑暗现象.短文需通过一些事例来揭示这一主题:

1)黑人不公平的遭遇:

①Werenottreatedasequalcitizens.

②Wecantgotothepublicparksorswimmingpools.

2)黑人反抗行为:

①WewantthesamerightsasthewhitepeopleinBirmingham.

②Wedemandbetterhousingandjobs.

③Wejoininthemarchandmarchpeacefully.

3)美国当局镇压黑人的行径:

①Thepolicecomeupandtellustogohome.

②Theywanttoforbidthemarch.

③Theyhituswiththeirsticksoverandoveragain.

④Theyputsomeofusinprison.

在改写成短文过程中,除了在内容要点上要覆盖上述几点,还必须注意几个问题:

1)人称改用第三人称;

2)时态应用过去时;

3)连接自然,行文流畅.