这篇作文条理清晰，语言流利，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。
IstheInternetDangeroustoChildren

AsfarasIknow，nowadaysmanyschoolsdon’tliketheirstudentstosurfontheInternet.EvenmoreparentsthinkoftheInternetasabadinfluenceintheirchildren’slives，whichisallbecausetherearemanyexamplesofstudentswhohavegivenuptheirstudiesorevenbecomebadasaresultofhavinggotintothehabitofsurfingontheInternet.

Frommypointofview，theInternetisnotdangeroustochildren.Generallyspeaking，themajorreasonsofmyopinioncanbelistedasfollows.Tobeginwith，theInternetplaysaveryimportantroleinthemodernizationofourworld.Inaword，ifwecannotusetheInternet，wecannotkeepupwiththepaceoftheE-time.

Inthesecondplace，theInternetcanhelpusalotinourworkandstudiesifproperlyused.Lastbutnottheleast，theInternetcanentertainuswithfunnystories，games，literatureandsoonasrelaxation，thuswecancombinestudywithjoy.Onthebasisofthosefactsabove，wecanreachtheconclusionthattheInternetisnotdangeroustochildren.

Inmyview，Isuggestthatparentsshouldinstallsoftwareinparticulartopreventchildrenfrompornwebsandlewdlanguage.AndIhopetherewillbemoreandmorechildrenmakingthemostoftheInternet，fortheInternetisahistoricdynamic，revolutionaryforce.