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MyUnforgettableTrip
WhenIwasaprimaryschoolstudent,myfamilyandItookatriptofivecitieswhichwereinthesouthofChina.
First,wecametoNanjingbyplane.ThatwasthefirsttimeIhadtakentheplaneandittookusanhourandahalftogetthere.WearrivedinNanjinginthemorning.At11:30wewenttoarestauranttohavelunch.Thefoodtasteddelicious.Intheafternoonwewentto“Zhongshanling”.ItwastheplacethatpreservethetombofMr.Sugshan.
Thenextday,wecametoWuxiandthenSuzhouwherewevisitedtheregionofriversandlakesof“周庄”.Itwasabeautifulandoldplace.Thehousetherewerealongtheriverandthewomenalwayswashedclothesatthebank.Thefourthday,wecametoHangzhouwhereWevisited“TheWestLake.Itwasverybeautifulandthewaterwasclear.Asweallknow,Hangzhouisfamousforsilkandtea,soweboughtsomebeautifulsilkandfamousteaof“龙井”.ThelastplacethatwevisitedwasShanghai.ItwasoneofthebiggestcityisChina.ThenightviewinShanghaiwasmorebeautifulthanBeijing.WevisitedtheTVtowerof“东方明珠”.Itwasthethirdtallesttowerintheworld.Standinginthetoweryoucouldseethewholecity.Intheevening,welivedinahotelwith25floors.Iwasveryexcitedthatevening.
ThistriptookussevendaysandwewentbacktoBeijingbyplane.Theplanewasveryverybig.Therewerethreeenginerooms.IfelthappyandIwouldneverforgetthetrip.