一、导语

Whatdoesbeautyreallymean？Everybodyhasitsowndefinition.Thestandardofbeautychangeswithdifferentsociety，cultureandnations.Someholdthepointthatthebeautifulappearanceisofgreatimportance，whichisvisibletoall.Othershavetheideathatthespiritualbeautyistheloveliestone，whichlastslong.Howeverdifferentitmightbe，theiropinionsareallacceptable.

什么是美呢？每个人都有自己的定义。美的标准因社会、文化和国度不同而产生差异。有的人认为相貌上的美是最重要、最直观的美；有的人认为心灵上的美是最可爱、最长久的美。虽然这些想法大不相同，但是它们对美的定义却都是不无道理的。

二、创设情境

以“Whatisbeautyinyourmind？”为主题，发表自己的观点，题目自拟。要求：

1.行文流畅，观点鲜明，论证充分；

2.内容丰富，层次分明，逻辑性强；

3.词数150左右。

三、学生习作

Beautywillbuynobeef

Everyoneadmiresbeauty.Everyonehashisownstandardaboutbeauty.

Nowadayssomepeopletendtothinkthattheyownbeautyiftheyhaveagoodlooking.Theyarenotsatisfiedwiththeirappearance.Theyspendmuchmoneytakingakindofoperation.Canbeautyreallybeman-made？Ifso，everybodycangetbeauty.Asaresult，thereisnobeautyatall.

Theappearanceisgivenbyourparentsandisuniqueintheworld.Everyoneshouldvalueit.Id（1）ratherprefernatureasthestandardofbeauty.Justacceptyourself，accepteverythingthegodgivestoyou，andcreatethebeautifullife（2）belongtoyou.

Manyheroesdonthavebeautifulsurface.However，theirbeautifulimagesoftencometoourminds.Theirbeautycomesfromtheircontributionstothesociety.

Dontbeeagertojudgewhetherapersonisbeautifulornotwithoutathoroughunderstandingofhim.Abeautifulpersonisnottheonewithagoodlooking，butwithabroadandkindheart.

Goodlookingispleasantwhilespiritualbeautyismoreimportant.Asanoldsayinggoes，“Virtueisfairerthanbeauty.”Ifyouhaveakindheart，youownrealbeauty.Agoodfaceisaletterofrecommendation

Somepeoplesaybeautyisjustaskindeep.Idontquiteagreewiththem.Goodappearanceoftenmakesabigdifferenceinsocialcommunication，competition，findingjobsandsoon.Notonlycangoodappearancehelpyoubecomemoreconfident，butalsoithelpsyoubeimpressed.Ifyouwanttogetagoodjob，thefirstsightisimportant.Physicalbeautyis（1）probabletodrawmuchattention.

However，wehavetofacethisproblem.Wehavenorighttochooseourappearance.Whennecessary，wecanmakeupourselves.Ifyouthinkdoingthisisagoodwaytoimproveyourconfidence，justdowhatyoureallywanttoregardless（2）othersopinion.Itisworthallthemoneyandtime.Facingavarietyofsocialpressures，weyoungpeopleshouldbuildconfidence.Confidenceisthekeytosuccess.

Inaword，youmaynotbethemostbeautifulone，butyoucanbethemostattractiveone；youmaynotthebestone，butyoucanbethemostconfidentone.Showyourselfandchanceswillkissyouintime.