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高考英语写作的训练方法(三)

时间:2025-04-16 09:57:07  作者:不详  字数:2400字
写好句子的方法二:改写句子
1)Mr.Greenisatallman,whowearsapairofthickglasses.(改成介词短语做伴随状语)
1)Thebookcostme300yuan.
Mr.Greenisatallmanwithapairofthickglasses.
2)Theiceonthelakeistoothinforustoskateon.(使用so…that…结构改写句子)
Theiceonthelakeissothinthatwecan’tskateonit.
练习方法三:一句多译
这本书花了我300元。
Ispent300yuanonthebook.
Ipaid300yuanforthebook.
Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.
Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.
我不懂什么英语,李明也不懂。
Idon’tknowanyEnglish,nordoesLiMing.
IhardlyknowanyEnglish,nordoesLiMing.
IhardlyknowanyEnglish,neitherdoesLiMing.
IhardlyknowanyEnglish,nomoredoesLiMing.
IhardlyknowanyEnglish,soitiswithLiMing.
IknownomoreEnglishthanLiMingdoes.
IknowaslittleEnglishasLiMingdoes.
一到家,我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。
On/Uponarrivinghome,IwrotedowneverythingIhadseen.
AssoonasIarrivedhome,IwrotedowneverythingIhadseen.
ThemomentIarrivedhome,IwrotedowneverythingIhadseen.
TheinstantIarrivedhome,IwrotedowneverythingIhadseen.
NosoonerhadIarrivedhomethanIwrotedowneverythingIhadseen.
昨天下午他才来。
Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.
Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.
Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.
Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.
Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.

谋篇的原则:
满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合,是无法达到有效表达的目的。
常见的句子之间的连接手段有:
使用代词指代上一句中的名词
重复使用上一句中的词
使用连接词
使用平行结构
高考大纲中常用的连接词:
表并列补充关系的:
whatismore,besides,also,aswell,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,
表转折对比关系的:
but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,incontrastto,despite,inspiteof,whereas,unlike,nevertheless,notonly…butalso,here…there,yearsago…today,this…that,theformer…thelatter,then…now,thefirst…whereasthesecond,once…now,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand,some…others,
表因果关系的:
since,as,because(of),for,so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,
表条件关系的:
if,onthecondition(that),aslongas,unless,orelse,
表时间关系的:
when,after,before,until,assoonas,later,afterwards,soon,lately,recently,since,fromthenon,eventually,inthemeantime,then,suddenly,atthesametime,next,earlythismorning/year/century,afteraninterval,now,after,presently,later,afterward,somewhatlater,finally,atlast,allofasudden,
表特定的顺序关系:
aboveall,firstofall,firstly,first,secondly,the,next,finally,intheend,atlast,
表换一种方式表达:
inotherwords,thatistosay,toputitanotherway,
表进行举例说明:
forinstance,forexample,like,suchas,
表陈述事实:
infact,actually,asamatteroffact,totellyouthetruth
表总结:
onthewhole,inshort,allinall,general,inaword,inconclusion,inclosing,insummary.
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